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Body Swap CH2_005

December 29th, 2013, 11:39 am

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Player Z
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Seems kinda shady...I wouldn't walk there...

Posted at August 4th, 2015, 5:11 am

haxorus29
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Changes (Guess Thomas isn't here...)

panel 3
mutch to much
to to too

panel 5
what to what's

Posted at April 10th, 2016, 3:24 am

Posted by Yorple (Guest)
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Panel 2: "then" should be "than"
Panel 3: "mutch" should be "much", "to" should be "too", and you should have a comma before "but"
Panel 4: native English speakers don't really use "at those times" like this. This should probably be omitted or replaced with something more specific like "when I read"
Panel 5: "What" should be "What's" or "What is"
Panel 6: "There's" may sound more natural here than "There is". "I never" should be "I've never" or "I have never". "it" should be "this" or "that" or a longer phrase like "something like that".

Posted at July 5th, 2017, 2:26 pm

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